The Halls of Pandemonium - Day 17
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You had me in tears in the 1st paragraph....
Iβm sorry. I wanted to make it sound like it could be a person or an animalβ¦maybe I should have given him a human name π₯Ί
Oh don't be sorry. You reached in deep & you wrote this brilliantly.
Awwww, beautifully done. Love this take on the prompt.
Thanks. I didnβt want to do horrorβ¦but I feel this was darker π
You struck a really nice compromise!
My stomach dipped from the first para itself. :( :(
Superbly done Sarah!
Thanks. I didnβt think I could do horror, and then switched to writing about animals and made it worse ππ
killed it! literally and figuratively! hahaha!
OMG! Gut-wrenching!
I know, Iβm sorry π I wanted a less dark story, and failed!
ππ’
You had me in tears in the 1st paragraph....
Iβm sorry. I wanted to make it sound like it could be a person or an animalβ¦maybe I should have given him a human name π₯Ί
Oh don't be sorry. You reached in deep & you wrote this brilliantly.
Awwww, beautifully done. Love this take on the prompt.
Thanks. I didnβt want to do horrorβ¦but I feel this was darker π
You struck a really nice compromise!
My stomach dipped from the first para itself. :( :(
Superbly done Sarah!
Thanks. I didnβt think I could do horror, and then switched to writing about animals and made it worse ππ
killed it! literally and figuratively! hahaha!
OMG! Gut-wrenching!
I know, Iβm sorry π I wanted a less dark story, and failed!